Back in business, baby!
Here are the first four pages of pencils. You've probably noticed that things have changed one last time. I rewrote the beginning- when I first wrote it it sounded great, but after finishing the book I realized that it was badly paced and unclear. The new one is much simpler.
I'm waiting on a verdict as to whether or not I should use pens or brushes for this, so if you have an opinion shout out.
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